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The Dream Agency - Page 02 WIP

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Reply Arwym Starlight, December 20th, 2008, 10:17 pm

Commentary I wanted to show that I'm actually working on page 02 of TDA. With difficulties and doubts, but I am. If you are one of my 7 readers and don't mind getting spoiled, take a look and tell me what you think of its progress so far. Even if that's only 2 panels. XD

I used a stock photo for panel 2. Dunno if I should... Panel 01 took a while because it's the first time I draw... gates in that angle, opening. I'll add a little sound effect in there to make sure the readers understand that the gate's opening. And just now, I noticed that there's something needing to get fixed in there. Oh, and those spots you see floating around are supposed to be leaves.

I like how Liz turned out in panel 2. She's so cute...

Comments, please.

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Reply Arwym Starlight, January 6th, 2009, 3:01 pm

More progress. Panel 3, a royal pain to draw. I gave a go at perspective, which I rarely do. I also tried to draw that with the famous line and pen/bezier tools, but it didn't work. So I drew with the tablet itself, and God, wasn't that complicated? But I think it's decent, for now. Once I'm more skilled and experienced, I'll surely try redrawing all these early pages.

Now, panel 4 is giving me problems, too. And again, it's because of perspective. I lack the knowledge. It's also for my lack of practice at drawing hands, although I have clearly improved in the last few weeks, forcing myself to draw hands again and again sometimes, until I could no more.

Well, I'm almost finished with this page, so I better hurry!

Reply Arwym Starlight, January 19th, 2009, 7:42 pm

3 more panels to go! Panel 4 done. Page is 3 more panels to go, plus dialogues and other effects.

And, er... I know it's no big deal. And the page looks fugly. Especially panel 3. Awful. But at least I finally found brushes that I like. :)

Um... I wonder if panel 4's background pattern is even visible? Is it maybe too light? I can barely see it myself right now. But it could be my screen.

Reply Arwym Starlight, January 21st, 2009, 2:07 am

Panels finished! Well, I guess that all there's left to do is add dialogs. :o

But, I'll go back to fix panel 3 in the near future.

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